Techniques of writing

                                                         

My father taught me these techniques. By these techniques I’ve improved my English writing very well. I’ve got good marks in writing article, letter and data interpretation in school. Let us start with the first Section ‘Techniques before Writing’ with the first chapter ‘Brain Storming’.

SECTION 1:- Techniques before writing

Chapter 1:- Brain Storming

 Brain Storming is the first thing we use before writing an article. This method is used in finding hints related to the topic given to you of your own, such as you have to write an article on given topic ‘Bribe’. So you should first use the method of Brain Storming.

Related hints on Bribe are:-

1.     1.  Poverty                                                              8. Rich  

2.       2. Exploitation                                                      9. Punishment

3.     3.  Corruption

4.       4.Greed

5.        5. Honest

6.        6. Illegal

7.        7. Bankrupt 
                                   By using these words let us write a paragraph on it. 

      As you know that there are many poor people in our country who want money to survive. Some greedy and rich people take advantage of it. By this there are a few number of honest people are left. When someone wants to kill, rob or do many illegal things they give money to another person who needs money then he do what the corrupt man says. It has raised killing kidnapping and destruction. By this people lost their lives. Become bankrupt and become poor. Corruption has caused the rich became richer and poor became poorer. 

When we use the method of Brain Storming we use our mind to find ideas and hints related to the given topic and write it on a paper. By this we can put the ideas we’ve found during writing the article. By Brain Storming you can structure an article and can get full marks in article competition. You can also use Brain storming in writing essay and letters.  




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THE TITANIC

                                                        

                              The Titanic an unforgettable incident

The Titanic was a passenger liner which was built from 1909-1911. It was a luxury ship which had taken more then 2000 passengers from Queenstown including some famous persons such as John Jacob Astor IV, Benjamin Guggenheim etc. It was called ‘the unsinkable’ by the engineers of this ship. On 11^Th April 1912, on its maiden voyage it left the Queenstown to New York in Atlantic. After 4 days of its voyage, at 11:40 p.m. when it was crossing the Atlantic a massive ice berg which was 3 times more than the weight of the Titanic struck to the ship. After 2 and a half hours the Titanic sank in ocean in which more than a 1000 passengers died, only 700 passengers survived. So why the ‘unsinkable’ sank?

During the construction of Titanic, a machine was introduced which could make strong nails for the Titanic but there were many difficulties of its transportation so people made the ship’s nails by their own. The metal used in the making of nails was rod ion which was not stronger than steel but the nails were made easily. These nails can tolerate less than 9000 pounds of pressure but the pressure of ice burg was about 14000 pounds which was more than the toleration limit of the nails used in Titanic. So that’s why Titanic sank but there is a mystery that why the crewmen of the ship couldn't saw the ice berg coming towards them?

 This is because in Atlantics the nights are very cold and it is very difficult to see anything during night as our eyes become cold. The crewmen of Titanic found many difficulties to see the ice berg coming towards them when they saw the ice berg they tried to move the ship but the ship and the ice berg rub against each other and the nails of the Titanic wore off making a big crack in which sank the ship. The reason of that it was called the ‘unsinkable’ that sixteen compartments were water tight as a result that the ship could float on the ocean but the crack was too long that more than twenty compartments were damaged which was capable to sink the ship

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The wreck of Titanic is 3 kilometers under the Atlantic Ocean in two pieces; the front part is at north and the other at south. The Titanic researchers believe that many of the passengers didn’t drown they were freeze to death as the Atlantic Ocean was very cold. The Titanic incident was the biggest destruction which people can’t forget it. We will hope that this kind of incident never happen again.  

Mango Wine

Manipulation of dreams

When we sleep at night we see dreams sometimes we see sweet dreams or horrible dreams. When we see sweet dreams we are so involved to it that we forget that we are dreaming. When we see horrible dreams we are so horrified that sometimes we woke up late at night. When we woke up in late at night and we try to sleep but the horrible dream which we had seen starts again.

Have you ever thought of the ‘Manipulation of dreams’ or we can say ‘Changing of dreams in dreams’. I didn’t think that it’s possible and I also don’t know its scientific reason but I can say that I have manipulated my dream.

When I was in 4^th class I saw a dream that I was dancing in my room it was a great experience suddenly I remembered that I was dreaming, I became angry and I slammed my foot on the floor. After I have slammed my foot on the floor I saw that my room has been changed into the inside of the Taj Mahal. I can’t believe that I have changed my dream. I slammed my foot on the floor again I saw that I came to another place. When I woke up I haven’t told my father or anyone. But after 3 years I told my father he was totally surprised. I also told my friends but they have never believed me.

After that dream I have never manipulated my dreams because when in dreams it’s difficult to know that we are dreaming. We are so involved to it that we forget that we are dreaming.

So if someone wants to change his dreams in dreams so he has to remember in dreams that he is dreaming then he may change his dreams.

Thinking of a new machine gun

Chapter 1

I play call of duty in my ps2 it is really like the Second World War. My parents feel dizzy while I am playing call of duty world at war. My favorite sub-machine gun is ‘Thompson’ and favorite rifle is ‘M1 GARAND’. Usually when I use machine gun sometimes my ammo becomes empty and while reloading the ammo enemy kills me in the game. I become angry and sometimes I say ‘if there were a grenade in the ammo’.

I got this idea from here that a machine gun has a cubical shaped ammo when we reload the Thompson we took out that ammo and fix other ammo. If that ammo becomes grenade means that if a soldier is reloading the machine gun he pulls the grenade chain by his teeth and throw the ammo containing grenade. I name this gun ‘Ammo-Grenade Thompson’.

How to play Medal of honor fontline in PS-2

Chapter 1

Most of the children don’t understand that what to do while playing ‘Medal of Honor: Frontline’ in ps2. So if somebody who plays this game for the first time thinks that it is a boring game and not understandable etc. This is not a boring game the fact is that in the starting level named the finest hour’s objectives have very difficult language such as embankment. You have to use dictionary if you can’t understand it. But the further levels are very interesting and there will be no use of dictionary.

There are six chapters in this game and each chapter contains three or four levels these levels have objectives. Without seeing these objectives you will not complete this game. I am not saying that there no enemies only objectives there are very powerful enemies having panzerchreks, bazooka and other powerful machine guns. It is like a real war because if you shot hit the enemy’s leg you have to hit four times on his leg to kill him it depends that how powerful your weapon is. You hit your enemy head or groin he will die because in real life if someone fire on the head it is possible that he will dead. When you are running you should stop for while to hear the footsteps of enemies this will alert you and you will kill them before they attack you.In your right bottom corner you will see a compass which has a life meter and hit location indicator.Some objectives will say that go to north, east, west or south so the compass will help you to tell the way.

If you have been hit by an enemy the life meter reduces 1% of you life depends that which weapon that you have been shot. You can increase your life by using healing occurs on your way but use these healing occurs very carefully because some healing give 50% percent of life back so if you have lost 1% of your life and if you use this healing it will only heal only 1% of your life. Use them when you are highly damaged go back to the place which that healing take place. But in some cases the doors of that place locked on its own.

In this game you can take many weapons but don’t think that you can take weapons of your own choice. The game will give you weapons. There are also powerful MGs but when you use an MG many enemies will come to kill you so kill them by MG. There are also scary background music which diverts makes your game very difficult and it feels that you are doing a real war.

This game checks that you’re hit locations on enemies and used bullets, your life after completing level, number of enemies killed, your preferred weapon etc. According to this it will give you medals. I have played this game and I have also experienced the difficulty and fun of this game. I would like to say to every 10 to 16 years teenager to play this game.

WWF Ring

A Ship

This creation is made using cardboard, Ice cream stick, Fevicol and Little Paint

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Chandigarh Shimla Visit

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भगदड़

गर्मियों की छुट्टियों में मेरे परिवार ने शिमला जाने का निर्णय लिया. मेरे पिता जी ने दिल्ली से शिमला जाने वाली राजधानी एक्सप्रेस की टिकट बुक करवा दी. ट्रेन पहले जून को सुबह आठ बजे निकलने वाली थी. हम सात बजे रेलवे स्टेशन पहुंचे. जैसे ही हम रेलवे स्टेशन में घुसे, मैंने देखा कि ट्रेन के नीचे बैग पड़ा हुआ है. मैंने अपनी माता से कहा कि में देख कर आता हूँ कि यह बैग किसका है.

मैंने रेलवे स्टेशन में कई लोगों से पूछा लेकिन उनमे से किसी का भी बैग नहीं था. अचानक के लड़का बोला 'लगता है आतंकवादिओं ने इस बैग में बम डाला है. यह सुनते ही सभी लोग भागने लगे. रेलवे स्टेशन में भगदड़ शुरू हो गई. मैं डर गया था. तभी अचानक ट्रेन से मम्मी की आवाज़ आई. उन्होंने मुझसे कहा कि इस बैग का मालिक मिल चुका है. में मुश्किल से ट्रेन में घुसा और वह बैग उसके मालिक को दे दिया. 

वह बैग एक अंकल का था जो एक संगीत कर थे. उस बैग में गाने की बुक और अन्य संगीत के चींजें भरी हुई थीं. अंकल ने मुझे धन्यवाद दिया. भगदड़ अब भी चालू थी. मैंने अंकल से उनका माइक माँगा और मैंने सभी लोगों को यह बता दिया कि इस बैग में बम नहीं है और संगीत की चीजें भरी हुई हैं. सभी लोग संतुष्ट हो गए. 

हम शिमला चले गए. ट्रेन से उतारते ही मुझे डर था कि कहीं फिर से भगदड़ न शुरू हो जाए. यह मेरा पहला अनुभव था कि मैंने भगदड़ का सामना किया. 

Save Our Children- Presentation by Dhruv

What happens when we get bored

On 28th December 2010 me and my father went to a clinic in the evening. He came back early from office and we reached the clinic of Doctor Pranjit Bhowmic in time. We saw that he was not in the clinic and there was a big line. Our turn was 17 so we waited. I started watching ‘Ten Cricket’ ‘India vs. South Africa' on T.V.

After 30 minutes

The match got stopped due to bad whether. Suddenly doctor arrived and the turn of patients started from 1.

After 30 minutes

It was the turn of number 4 me my father was waiting but I was becoming bored. I started yawning and my head was paining.

After 1 hour

I was totally mad I wanted to get out from this clinic and it was the turn of 13.  I thought that I was in jail for many years. Then it was my turn after a few minutes. I was happy that after my turn we would get out of there. The doctor told me that I was better than before. He gave us medicines of 7 days. When we got out of there I thought that I was free from jail.

After that day I realized that any person in anywhere waiting for something longer and by this he is not out from that place he will become dull and bored.

Some Ramblings

The Smoking Toilet

On 8th December 2009, I went to washroom in 1st period. When I opened my zip, suddenly a strange smell was coming from the hole of toilet. My nose was rotting and I was thinking that the toilet is drinking cigarette. I came with holding my nose. After 7 periods I went to washroom and I found that the smoke was gone. I felt relieved. I think that toilet has suffered with cancer and after it's operation it cross its heart to never smoke again.

Key Lost

On 8th april 2010, we went to our old home which in Hissar.  While going to Hissar, in Rohtak we took our lunch at Madras cafe. I ate idli sambhar which is my favorite, my father had tea and vegetable paratha, my mother also ate vegetable paratha and my grandmother drank lassi. After luch, when my father was taking out the key of car  he saw that the key was not there. He checked his pocket but it was not there.  We checked his laptop bag but it was not there. We looked inside the whole cafe but it was there. We tried other visitors' cars' keys but they were not fitting in the lock of our car. My father used a scale to open the door of the car and it was opened. We checked the car but it was not there.  When my father was going to buy a new key suddenly the gaurd found the key. He found it from three girls which were sitting in front of us who found the key from the ground.

Pulkit Khatri 

When I was in 7th class there came a new student Pulkit he was a very naughty student he gives many abuses to other students. On 21st April he came to my seat another boy Garv was beside me he asked him.

Pulkit: give me your English notebook I have to complete my work.

Me and Garv: we also have to complete our work.

By saying this he twisted our cheeks. We were very angry we complained the teacher she scolded him but Pulkit is Pulkit. Today he again came to our seat and dancing like a mad and he was irritating me I complained the teacher. She scolded him then he hugged me and said like a boss of the office he is my friend then I thought that it's brain screw is not only loose rather its fallen down.

Monkey snatches the bread

On 23th august 2010 when I went to buy the bread and kurkure when I went back at the of my home the road was filled with water I decided to go by the side of the road. Suddenly a monkey jumped from a wall and started chattering.  I run out of fear. When I was about to turn he scrached my polybag and the bread fell down from the polybag. When I saw that their is a hole in polybag I went to take the bread but monkey has already taken the bread. That was my first experience that the bread. It was all hunters fault, they killed the many tigers and cut so many trees. That's why those monkeys came to cities and towns.

Pipe Blast 

On 27th January 2010 at night when my father was doing laptop. In kitchen when my mother was preparing milk for me and my father. Suddenly she saw that the sink pipe was leaking it was connected by RO pipe. My father went to see the problem. He tried to pull the pipe suddenly a strong pressure of water came and my father and me tried to stop it but it became harder and harder. My father got all wet. I went to almirah and took my father's clothes my father said to me that call the gaurd of the society. My father said to the guard to turn off the pump of the water. Guard turned off the pump and the water got lower for sometimes and again then a great preasure started coming and then we were not able to stop because my father had already wore the clothes and the time was 12 pm and then we went to sleep but for sometimes my father went to Balcony and then he came back and sleep. But in night it was continuously going on. At 2 am my father and mother tried to stop it but failed. In the morning I went to school when I came back my mother told me that the plumber came and fixed it.

Poem on Courtesy

If you behave with courtesy,
The people will respect your honesty.

Courtesy is the polish of personality,
if you talk to others courteously.

If you apologise your mistake,
The impression of sincerity you will make.

If you ask for help using courtesy-treasure
Everyone will help you with pleasure

Dhruv's Presentation- Save Our Planet

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GLISCOR

Clay Pokemon

Clay Pokemons

Kaleidoscope Classic - Baby Elephant- With Original Solution from Dhruv

Baby Elephant

Solution